E-Portfolio Writing Term 1 - Camp Timeline

E-PORTFOLIO - Writing Term One - Camp Timeline

ACHIEVEMENT OBJECTIVES:

LEVEL 2

• I can write simple sentences correctly that make sense
• I can use different sentence starters
• I can edit my writing so that it makes sense

LEVEL 3

• I can use simple and compound sentences that are grammatically correct
• I can use a variety of sentence beginnings
• I can select  words that are appropriate to my topic and purpose

LEVEL 4

• I can use a variety of sentence beginnings, types and lengths for effect - simple, compound, complex
• I can use language that is appropriate to audience and purpose - expressive and specific

Go through your writing and highlight examples of the following sentences.

2x Simple sentences - YELLOW

2x Compound sentences - PINK - NOT AORAKI

Rotation Activities

The rotation activities were The burma trail, recreation/swimming, bushwalk, outdoor living skills and the indoor bouldering wall. When we did the burma trail it was really fun because I did it blindfolded. It was like a zigzag trail and  there was a rough rope we had to hold on to so we knew where to go. In recreation/swimming, I mostly went in the pool but I also went on the rocky and scary monorail. The pool could be cold at times other times it was warm. The bushwalk I didn't do because it was raining. Outdoor Living Skills was one I enjoyed the most because we got to make a shelter with 3 long pieces of string, a big tarpaulin, 4 pegs and a heavy hammer. There was unbelievably tall trees and it was very exciting. I thought the indoor bouldering was the best because it was like a rock climbing wall. We played games like Shark attack and around the world. Shark attack is like musical chairs but you have two sharks/taggers and my mum and Thomas's dad were the taggers. In shark tag you had to get onto a climbing wall to survive. My mum went crazy and dived to tag people. That was all the rotation activities.